Friday, June 24, 2011

Super Writers

This week two fantastic members of our class went to writing extension with Mrs Howison. Their aim was to paint pictures using words. They have both chosen a colour and written wonderful poems about that colour in the world around them. Well done Jake and Oliver.


The sky is blue shining in the atmosphere
Water is blue bubbling in your mouth.
Windows are blue shivering in the sun.
A screen is blue,
Waiting, excited to be used.
The ocean is blue with the fish
Leaping in the sea.
The smurfs trotting around their village.
Aqua, navy, turquoise.
By Oliver



Blue
Blue pens writing
Planets floating around in the atmosphere
Night skies with dazzling stars.
Blue slides coming from steep places.
Blue buildings almost touching the sky.
Blue birds fluttering.
Tears pouring from blue eyes.
Shimmering oceans filled with water life creatures.  
By Jake

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